Name : MEYLANI DITA RAKHMAWATI
NIM : A1C112036
This is a diary of my activities as a student. My name is Meylani Dita Rakhmawati I am a student at Jambi University, The Faculty of Education, Department of Chemistry Education. I want to tell you about their daily activities as a student to meet an English assignment. This diary was written on Monday, dated May 04 2015.
Every morning I wake up at 5:00, after
that I was making the bed and the dawn prayer. At 5:30 I was preparing breakfast because I live away from my parents. And then in 0600 I went to shower, then breakfast and get ready to take my youger brother to school at 06:30.
After that I went to college. I went to
college riding my motorcycle, I need one hour to get to campus, because I had to take my brother to school first within 30 minutes from home. And distance school my sister with my campus as far as 30 minutes of my house at the intersection of Rimbo but my younger brother schools in Sipin (SMA Adhyaksa). Because the dense morning activities that I sometimesblate if the course early in the morning.I spent 7 hours of my time on campus. I can perform the noon prayer and lunch on the campus
during recess time. About 14:30 I went home and got home at 15.30.
It was my daily activities. I do this
activity from Monday to Friday, while Saturday and Sunday I got off thevweekend. But sometimes I can not enjoy the weekend. Because the task of piling made should stay up to complete the task which should gather in the mornings. What do you think about my daily activities, and can you give me solusion ?
Please leave your comments below
Thanks
I think the use of "their" in "I want to tell you about their daily activities" is wrong. You supposed to my, because this is about your dialy activities.
BalasHapushi Meylani
BalasHapusactivities in the morning you are very dense,
You must deliver your brother to school in adiyaksa, while the house at the intersection of Rimbo, then you also have morning campus classes.
is there any other solution,
for example, a better brother to school using public transportation. I think it is more effective
I think I was wrong in choosing the words. I'll fix it. Thank Raudhah
BalasHapus